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http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Intueri/Absorb_LMS&oldid=400065191[edit]

--!> Hello, This is my first article submission. Please provide feedback if possible. thanks alot.

Robert Filyk

Intueri (talk) 04:47, 2 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The article currently has no references. Without them, the article is likely to just get deleted, so please try and add some. WP:CITE, WP:Reliable references and WP:VRS should all be useful pages. Chevy monte carlo 16:26, 3 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JaceMil/Integrated_Public_Alert_and_Warning_System_%28IPAWS%29[edit]

My first page submission, so I'm using the "workspace" instead of directly posting it. I have additional content to add, which I will do in the next few days... but I'm getting syntax errors related to references, and I need some guidance determining the correct way to display a link vs a reference.

This topic has links to bunches of other wiki documents, but none of them really explore this particular issue entirely -- this one specifically, as is a "conjunction" of multiple government programs with a lot of details.

-JM- (talk) 07:41, 2 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

User:Nkrita/Sinyavsky–Daniel_trial_(rewrite)[edit]

I am looking to replace the current article on the Sinyavsky–Daniel trial with this English-sourced and expanded draft. I am not sure what the policy here would be. My draft includes all the information of the current article, but can I just replace it?

Nkrita (talk) 13:05, 2 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, you can do that. In the future (if you want) you can edit articles like that directly in the regular article. WhatamIdoing (talk) 07:03, 5 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Marky555/GlobalCollect[edit]

Please have a look at the article I wrote about GlobalCollect

Marky555 (talk) 14:56, 2 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Relative_index_of_inequality[edit]

I would appreciate feedback on whether I have laid out the article correctly, and how to add RII as another 'relative risk' measure in the categories (it should appear alongside risk ratio (RR). S9901470 (talk) 16:51, 2 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It looks pretty good now. I fixed the section headings to comply with WP:ACCESS.

I'm not sure what your concern is with the category listings. It all looks correct. WhatamIdoing (talk) 07:08, 5 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Libertars/Boris_Anisfeld[edit]

Libertars (talk) 17:08, 2 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Clifford_Day_Mallory_Cup[edit]

I'm hoping to have the article reviewed so that "unreviewed article" template can be taken off the top. It's about the national men's sailing championship.

Racerchaser (talk) 19:12, 2 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Done, but you need to find some WP:Independent sources, or the article may eventually be deleted as not WP:Notable. WhatamIdoing (talk) 00:39, 6 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Warne, NC[edit]

Ncboy2010 (talk) 21:37, 2 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It looks pretty good. I'm not a fan of "media" sections in city articles, but if you're going to have such a thing, then you should probably include the local newspaper.

You might find more ideas for expansion at Wikipedia:WikiProject Cities/US Guideline. WhatamIdoing (talk) 07:16, 5 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]