Talk:Laurie Brokenshire

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New article review[edit]

I'm happy to post this article for peer review, but I haven't found the mechanism to do this - since it was fully-formed at creation. Please feel free to report any problems found with the article or post it for review, as appropriate. Thanks, Icairns 2 (talk) 21:51, 15 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Found it now... Wikipedia:Peer review/guidelines Icairns 2 (talk) 14:05, 17 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The article has been reviewed as a new article anyways. Icairns 2 (talk) 08:09, 21 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Lead article rewrite[edit]

It has been suggested the the lead of the article needs to be rewritten to resolve style issues. Please can you post any such issues below, and someone (maybe me) can address these points, so that we can remove the flag warning.

What it should look like[edit]

Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section

Issues with current version[edit]

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Thanks, Icairns 2 (talk) 08:09, 21 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Additional citations needed[edit]

I intend to remove the add cite reqd from the Puzzling section, since there are now 4 separate references correctly lodged. I think this sufficiently addresses any previous problem with this section. Icairns 2 (talk) 16:28, 1 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]