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This page needs an editor to write few initial sentences to explain what this page actually is. Is it a film? A TV programme - there is nothing to say this. When did it appear? I have moved all the initial text into a section labelled 'Plot'
Will editors please not use indented lines to begin paragraphs, as this really ruins the layout of the webpage? Parkywiki (talk) 14:38, 26 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Recent edits have improved the page structure, and the article now needs some references to support all the factual statements. May I also suggest that editors ask whether such a detailed, lengthy and confusing plot summary is really necessary. Would an encyclopaedia actually need such detail? Sometimes less is more. I'm not trying to be rude - I hope these suggestions are accepted as positive criticism from one who does not know the subject at all, but who wants to see good quality across all encyclopedia articles here. Regards. Parkywiki (talk) 22:22, 27 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Nope, it doesn't. I've checked it twice for copyvios, but I'm not finding anything. I've tagged it though. –Compassionate727(T·C) 14:19, 28 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
